1
.
DRAFT
:
A
GOOD
breakfast
is
important
.
It
GIVES
your
body
energy
.
It
also
helps
you
PAY
ATTENTION
.
Breakfast
supplies
many
NECESSARY
nutrients
.
It
is
HELPFUL
for
good
health
.
MAIN
IDEA
:
Breakfast
is
important
for
good
health
.
REVISED
:
A
____________________
breakfast
is
important
.
It
____________________
your
body
energy
.
It
also
helps
you
____________________
.
Breakfast
supplies
many
____________________
nutrients
.
It
is
____________________
for
good
health
.
2
.
DRAFT
:
Sunflowers
can
make
any
garden
look
PRETTIER
.
You
will
enjoy
all
the
colorful
INSECTS
they
attract
.
They
are
also
EASY
to
take
care
of
.
Sunflowers
GROW
in
sunlight
.
They
can
get
to
be
TALL
,
so
be
sure
to
give
them
support
!
MAIN
IDEA
:
Sunflowers
are
a
good
addition
to
your
garden
.
REVISED
:
Sunflowers
can
make
any
garden
look
____________________
.
You
will
enjoy
all
the
colorful
____________________
they
attract
.
They
are
also
____________________
to
take
care
of
.
Sunflowers
____________________
in
sunlight
.
They
can
get
to
be
____________________
feet
high
,
so
be
sure
to
give
them
support
!
