Fill in the Blanks AnnotationOnline version how to annotate parts of an essay by Kristin Ruopp 1 EVIDENCE EXPLANATIONOFEVIDENCE EXPLANATIONOFEVIDENCE EXPLANATIONOFEVIDENCE TRANSITION EVIDENCE MAINIDEA EVIDENCE While The Georges and the Jewels is told from a human first - person perspective , the author of Black Beauty : The Autobiography of a Horse uses a horse to narrate and tell the story . * This is an example of * . The imagery used to describe the horse's feelings becomes effective because it is from the horse's point of view . * This is an example of * . The author uses the horse to emphasize how the " breaking in " process is long and tough . The horse explains how the bit is hard and uncomfortable when he says , " ? after a good deal of coaxing , he got the bit into my mouth , and the bridle fixed , but it was a nasty thing ! " * This is an example of * The horse , as narrator , shows his feelings , and this makes logical sense , because this process only happens to horses . The horse tells the reader that " Every one may not know what breaking in is , therefore I will describe it . " * This is an example of * A human could say this , but since it is from the point of view of a " horse , " the reader pays attention to it more because for the horse , it is a first person experience . Additionally , * This is an example of * when the narrator describes the bit and bridle being inserted into its mouth , the reader believes it more because instead of it being from a human perspective ( where a human just guesses how uncomfortable the process is ) , the horse directly says it feels uncomfortable without the reader having to infer anything . * This is an example of * The reader can feel the discomfort when the horse says , " ? a great piece of cold hard steel as thick as a man's finger to be pushed into one's mouth , between one's teeth , and over one's tongue ? " * This is an example of * and the author clearly does this on purpose . The horse's dislike is evident . Because it is from a horse's perspective , instead of a human's perspective , the descriptive details become more meaningful , and the author clearly does this on purpose . * This is an example of * .