The
paper
was
written
in
a
____________________
and
unclear
style
.
All
the
details
were
spread
out
and
made
no
sense
.
I
was
hoping
that
the
writer
would
have
been
able
to
____________________
the
amount
of
____________________
information
.
It
made
the
paper
complicated
and
less
efficient
in
making
a
claim
.
If
the
writer
hopes
to
publish
,
it
is
____________________
to
____________________
themselves
in
the
editing
process
.
He
or
she
will
have
to
examine
the
writing
in
a
deeper
,
more
thoughtful
way
.
