All in all
Lexical variety
Summing up
Besides
In conclusion
Even though
My personal view is that
On the one hand/on the other hand
Despite/In spite of
Moreover
Many people think/believe/feel that...
Accuracy: Have I made any grammar mistakes?
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It is generally believed/agreed that...
However
All things considered
Although
contractions
In addition
as well as
In my opinion
What is more
vague language
informal language
To sum up
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It cannot be denied that...
repetition of words and structures
I firmly believe
I personally believe
